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TV PILOT COVERAGE

Green Typewriter

FEATURE COVERAGE

Document with Pen

PAGE-BY-PAGE SCRIPT NOTES

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STORY WORKSHOP

$40

  • Pilot script reading             

  • 20 - 70 pages (approx.)      

  • Speedy turnaround            

  • 2 page of notes                  

  • Review series setup            

  • Character-driven analysis   

  • Rewrite strategies               

$60

  • Feature script reading        

  • 90 - 120 pages (approx.)     

  • Speedy turnaround             

  • 3 pages of notes                 

  • Review plot and structure  

  • Character-driven analysis   

  • Rewrite strategies               

$100

  • In-Depth Margin Notes      

  • Features and Pilots             

  • Proofread and edit              

  • 1 page of additional notes 

  • Review format and style     

  • Detailed dialogue critique 

  • Beat-by-beat advice           

$20

  • 1 hour livechat session       

  • Practice pitch project         

  • Story consultation               

  • Receive in-time feedback   

  • Marketing Strategies          

  • Brainstorm ideas                 

  • Insider advice                      

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ABOUT

I got the nickname Story Robot for being a script-reading machine. My real name is Josh. I’m an industry reader with over three years of experience working with writers, managers, and development executives. Being a part of the creative process is my life’s joy. I have a deep love for stories and the people who craft them.


Here to help you tell your story.

THE STORY ROBOT APPROACH

READ TO UNDERSTAND, NOT CRITICIZE

  • Recognize your intentions and help you better achieve them

  • Focus on finding solutions instead of pointing out problems

  • Help make what's in your head crystal clear on the page

  • Your vision is paramount above all else

CHARACTER-DRIVEN ANALYSIS

  • Provide insights to active and endearing characterization

  • Delve deep into character choices, motivations, and arcs

  • Connect dots missing or under-emphasized to plot and theme

  • Workshop dialogue solutions to best bring voices to life

FEELINGS OVER DATA

  • No ratings, scores, percentages, grades, etc.

  • No checklist of pros and cons

  • Focus on utilizing techniques to best invoke emotion

  • Treat your story as a work of art in progress

MOTIVATE YOU FOR THE REWRITE

  • Leave you with a clear sense of direction for future drafts

  • Outlined rewrite solutions and strategies

  • Screenplay recommendations for further inspiration

  • Formatting and structure advice for first-time writers

I highly recommend Story Robot. Josh gives the best notes! His ability to focus on both the big picture and small supporting details is incredibly insightful. Working with him on my TV Pilot has been a joy. He is quick, thorough, and really quite funny. Josh helps illuminate those little blind spot we all have with our own work; without a doubt my pilot has improved. Very satisfied. Thanks for the help Josh!

Bryan Scott Ewing

WHY STORY ROBOT?

EXPERIENCED INDUSTRY READER

From Hollywood Execs to Indie Filmmakers

INSIGHTFUL STORY INSTINCTS

Clear, Concise, and Constructive Feedback

DEDICATED ALLY TO WRITERS

Committed To Helping You Achieve Your Vision

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REQUEST SERVICE

Fill out the form below. Feel free to tell me about your story and any problem areas you're facing. I will respond via email, let you know my current availability, take your specific needs into consideration, and we will work from there.

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